Thursday 9 May 2019

Road Safety Week

WALT:write within the persuasive writing structure.

Why Karoro School Should Have A Kea Crossing


I strongly believe having a kea crossing is very important to have
at Karoro School because  many students need to cross the state
highway to get places, for the child’s own safety and because doing
kea patrol provides chance for the older kids to be mature and have
responsibility for something within their school.


Most people would agree that having a kea crossing would give
seniors a chance to be more of a  role model and to lead in something
for their school. Children being involved with their school by doing the
kea crossing is helpful because without the students  their wouldn’t
be a way for them to get across busy roads safely. Many seniors like
to interact with their school and toparticipate in new things so this a
perfect way children may participate in another thing for their school.


It’s easy to see why Karoro School needs a kea crossing because many
children bike, walk and also catch a ride to and from school to get home
or to get to places they need to go. Many children are tired after being at
school for seven hours and are too busy  not knowing what they
are doing. After school I see younger children and preteens actually using
the kea crossing not because they have to for crossing a state highway,
but for them to get somewhere else. After school when
children are let out of their classrooms  they are running, laughing with
their friends
and are not thinking about road safety.

We must realize that this so obvious and important why schools should
keep using a kea crossing because ives safety to the children crossing the
dangerous roads. It’s obvious to see, when having a kea crossing
decreases the amount of crashes and provides safety to the children
crossing because they are all crossing together at the one time and at
one place under the guidance of the patrol. Just the other week there
was a crash with three cars because of a child crossing the road without
a kea crossing in the morning.You’re ridiculous if you think that not having
a kea crossing after school is not important! This is so important because
if we don’t change this now or not keep the kea crossing after school many
children could get seriously hurt and these accidents would keep happening.

In conclusion, kea crossing ( kea patrol) should stay at our school because
students crossing a roads safely is  very important because they need to go
places, for the child’s own safety and because this provides a chance for the
older kids to be mature as well as having responsibility for something within their school.



1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Jennae
    Your writing is excellent and your argument is presented clearly. When you posted your work it run over into the side area. Please correct this so it is structured well on the page.

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.