Persuasive Writing- Why we should have pets

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing about why it is a good idea to have pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Good ideas to have pets.
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I strongly believe that having a pet is a great benefit to a family.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly, some types of dogs have been trained to do specific jobs. For an example, in Alaska, Huskies guard their owners houses to protect themselves from  wolves and snow foxes. Another dog that is good to have is a sheep dog. They help you if you are having trouble rounding sheep and the dog just chases the sheep and sometimes cows to help the farmer. I truly believe it is good to have a specific dog to do good jobs.
	Secondly,some dogs can tell when their owner has cancer or cancer cells. Also they can tell when their sugar level is high or low. I truly believe it is a good idea to have a dog because sometimes they can warn you when their owner has something wrong with their medical condition.
	Thirdly, it’s good to have a cat or a dog so they can get rid of pests such as mice, rats, weasels and stoats which can spread diseases. It is good to have a cat or a dog, because they kill our native birds and also because stoats and weasels eat baby eggs. This has a huge effect on our already endangered animals.
	LastIy, I strongly believe it is a good idea to have farm animals like pet sheep, cows, chickens and pigs. It is a good idea because they give you food like a sheep gives you meat, a cow gives you milk, a goat gives you milk and cheese, a chicken gives you eggs and a pig gives you bacon and crackle.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion I believe that it is a good idea to have pets because they help people with medical issues, dogs can sense when their owner has cancer,  farm animals give you food, and some dogs have specific jobs to do. Therefore it is very important for people to have pets.