Thursday 21 September 2017

My Robot Rampage writing

This term we have been learning how to write a narrative piece of writing. This is my Robot Rampage writing. Please leave a thoughtful, positive and kind comment.


Richie rich
Every weekend there was one job Mark hated doing: cleaning his room. He’d Much rather be building his latest robot invention in the shed. That was it! What if Mark could build a robot to clean his room?

As soon as Mark had that idea to build a robot he spent all night trying to make it. The first attempt did not work and he tried again and ended up finishing at 4:00am in the morning. When the sun came out Mark went up to his room to test his robot.

He had just pressed the on button and it started to clean his room. Mark was so happy and relaxed that he ended up falling asleep. The robot was as fast as a cheetah. Then suddenly Mark woke up to the sound of a crowd ROARING! (horu) . There was no sign of the robot and Mark noticed the whole neighbourhood was standing all around Marks robot. Mark ran up to them and asked “Is my robot being a nuisance?” “No” said the crowd. Then next the crowd started throwing money on the ground for Mark’s robot. Then every weekend the neighbourhood hired Mark’s robot to clean their house and that’s how Mark became rich.




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