Stormy Sea
I can feel the whistling breeze,
so cold I felt like I was going to freeze,
feathered seagulls were crying,
like they wanted food,
but I think seagulls were just ‘in a mood’,
flashing lightning was so bright,
like bright stars in the night sky.
Hi Jennae my name is Hajera and I go to Panmure Bridge School,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you wrote the seagulls were crying, like they wanted food and how next time you can do the seagulls watching as if they were a spy.
Greetings Jennae
ReplyDeleteI think you have done an amazing job.What did you learn and how?I think you should work on you blurb. Your blurb is important because when someone reads it they can understand what you have learnt. I really like how you have describe each new idea related to the poem. I think the best part about you blog post is the poem I like how it rhymes.
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