Narrative Writing

Subarus

9000 million miles away from Earth is a planet called Subarus.

On a fine summer’s day a young girl named Alpha walked along the lime green grass,
her long black braided hair dangling over her shoulders.

Alpha could hear the sound of a Macaw chirping and the rustling

of the trees as they waved side to side, dancing to a chorus of unheard music.

Her pale blue eyes, pasty in the summer light looking out into the horizon.

Her pale skin and black clothes standing out with the white of her shoes.

Alpha stopped walking because she heard a distant rumble.

The rumbling then stopped and she couldn’t hear anything.

Everything was dead silence. So she kept walking, keeping alert

of what's happening around her.

She thought the rumbling stopped, until it started up again a few minutes after.

She looked all around herself to try find what was going on.

Again it stopped, she began to be worried and scared because although

she could hear rumbling she couldn’t see anything.

She started to look around again,

she could hear the whistling of an object falling from the bright blue clear sky.

As Alpha turned her head she could see a big, bold, jagged object with red,

orange and yellow flames heading for Subarus.

Before she knew it a meteorite hit with a loud BANG!

The ground shook like there was something moving beneath it.

Alpha had no idea what to do so she started to find somewhere to hide.

She came across this empty old wooden brown house.

Alpha quickly ran inside the old shack and looked out the clear glass

windows to see what was going on.

Everything was quiet and still.

Alpha now decided to go outside.

She then swung open the door and walked outside

as she then shut the door behind her.

She started to head for Carton Lake.

She took a narrow path down to the lake with lots of purple

osteospermum flowers around her almost like the flowers has been

stroked with paint fading from Dark purple to light purple.

Alpha came across this girl that was standing on the water's edge skimming rocks.
She had long, bright, smooth turquoise hair streaked with purple braided and

neatly into two french braids on each side of her head.

“Hi I’m Alpha, who are you?” asked Alpha.

“Hello I’m Diana,” replied Diana.

“You’re very good at skimming rocks when did you learn how to do that?” asked

Alpha. “It was a skill I learned growing up,” said Diana.

Diana and Alpha were walking together along

the lake until they both heard the sound of a rumble coming

from above Alpha and Diana.

“COME ON LET'S GO,” yelled Diana.

Alpha started to run when the meteor had hit already,

Diana and Alpha were terrified.

They thought it was all over but about another 50 more

came crashing down one after another.

By now the meteors hit everywhere, the forest was destroyed.

The meteors were scattered everywhere leaving nowhere to go.

Diana and Alpha where now running as the were dodging all

the meteorites.

Alpha had now lost Diana because of how far ahead Diana was

in front of Alpha.

Diana suddenly stopped and checked if Alpha was still running

behind her Diana  now realized she left Alpha behind her.

Diana was starting to get

worried on where Alpha would be.

Diana was running back trying to remember what way she ran to get where she was.
While Diana was trying to find Alpha,

Alpha started to run back to where they started to run hoping that  Diana will remember
the way. As Diana was running back she was remembering

parts of where she ran.

She remembers running past a big mud hole in the ground.

So she knows she’s going the right way.

Alpha was worried that she started to run without thinking of where she was. Suddenly Diana and Alpha ran into each other.

Diana and Alpha were relieved.

“Where did you go?” asked Diana.

“You ran to fast in front of me,” replied Alpha.

“Sorry,” said Diana.

“As long as we have found each other,” said Alpha.

“ It was nice meeting you,” said Alpha.

“It was nice meeting you too,” replied Diana.

Alpha and Diana  said there last goodbyes to each other and set

off in their separate ways.

The End