Hi Jennae, I like the idea of you trying to tell people not to start a fire in dry places and not near flammable things. Next time you could add in how you start the fire not just saying put twigs on the fire and then light it. You should say what to start the fire with under the twigs. It is good that you have subtitles so the reader can find information easily. From Jack
Hi Jennae, I like the idea of you trying to tell people not to start a fire in dry places and not near flammable things. Next time you could add in how you start the fire not just saying put twigs on the fire and then light it. You should say what to start the fire with under the twigs. It is good that you have subtitles so the reader can find information easily.
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